I asked my friend Barry to proofread something for me. Oh, what great help he was!
Dusky: tell me if this makes sense…
Forgive me if I have come on too strong. I can’t help it. If I feel something, I express it. I can go many, many months without feeling a certain way, and when I finally do, it’s only natural that I won’t keep it to myself. I vent. Any woman I’ve ever been with can tell you of this. I’m not afraid to vent, no matter how crazy I’m thought to be by the recipient of my words.
It’s not my intent to insult your intelligence, and I hope you don’t take it that way. At the same time, I must say that I will not blame you for taking my words with a grain of salt. In fact, I encourage you to be skeptical. Don’t let your guard down. Most men out there are out to get you (women in general), and those who are legit will stick around long enough to prove their worth. If I don’t, rest assured that my impatience — highly influenced by my uncertainty of deserving you — got the best of me.
Barry: wow whats this
Dusky: that last sentence…. is it all right?
Barry: i think this is fagot shit
Dusky: is it syntactically correct?
Barry: “lets have sex and we’ll see from there”
Barry: there thats it
Barry: 1 sentence
Hehe. Bastard. It’s fucking amazing a girl actually laid eyes on him. 😀
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